Crowds were cheering, they were throwing poisonous flowers at me but this was all just a dream. I suddenly felt a cold misreable hand on my shoulder but I just thought that i had enough time. I just needed to grab that peice of metal to hit the hand. I wwas too late. Someone had pulled me into the curtains and had taken me away. I woke up to al tall man dressed in black staring at me. I was so scared. He haqd a gun in his hand and was pointing it at ME! All he said was “we need to talk.”
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Wow, this is quite an unnerving story. It had suspense and intrigue which kept me wanting to read more. I really loved the line, ” I suddenly felt a cold miserable hand on my shoulder …” as it created a strong image for me.
Thank you for sharing this week.
Mrs. Middleton
Team 100WC
Surrey, Canada
Awesome Jasi, I love the dreaming and the character is woken up.
Thank you Miranda and Mrs. Middleton for commenting. I hope you can do it again soon.
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I love the 100 word challenge Jasi! It is really interesting how you write.